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Do You Need Help Writing Your Story?
I'm going to help you craft or fix a story
you'll be excited to share and one readers will love!
I offer editing packages such as manuscript evaluations and developmental editing.
We can work together on your manuscript as I coach you through the writing process with weekly or monthly coaching slots.
you'll be excited to share and one readers will love!
I offer editing packages such as manuscript evaluations and developmental editing.
We can work together on your manuscript as I coach you through the writing process with weekly or monthly coaching slots.
"Your precise directions, encouraging words, consistent follow-up, and probing questions helped make the often grueling journey easier to manage."
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Book Coaching Package
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Book Coaching Package
Email me the first 5 pages of your manuscript (double-spaced), word count, a brief description of your book, and what kind of help you need. I'll respond with a project estimate and a way forward that starts with a free Zoom consultation.
About Me
I care about creative issues because I've had them. I simplify the writing process for you.
Years ago, an editor graciously pointed out a novice mistake in my first draft. I set out to study story structure and learn the craft of writing. After publishing over twenty titles, with tens of thousands sold, hundreds of thousands given away for free, and millions of pages read, I now help other writers find and fix issues in their manuscripts. I'm a book coach and a freelance developmental editor. I've worked in the publishing industry with both independent and traditionally published authors of historical, young adult, speculative, mystery, science fiction, Christian fiction, and romance! I have edited for traditional and independent presses and have worked with award-winning authors! In my day job, I tell stories to the military and policymakers with intelligence products and analytical assessments. I have a graduate certificate in teaching and learning from Norwich University and I'm a graduate student in Drexel University's MFA in Creative Writing program (2024). Below are a few traditionally published titles I've edited. Subscribe to my free newsletter: https://torichase.substack.com/ |
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Book Coaching Testimonial
"Your precise directions, encouraging words, consistent follow-up, and probing questions helped make the often grueling journey easier to manage.
...it was your personality that made working with you so enjoyable. Every email we exchanged left me feeling energized, inspired, and capable. When we met on Zoom, it was like connecting with an old friend.
I also appreciated how you approached correction. No one likes to hear negative words, especially when they have put so much energy and effort into their project. Your comments remained free of judgment and condescension. Your tone stayed positive and encouraging, urging me to be my best and to stretch myself.
I most appreciated Tori’s ability to listen with purpose, give her full attention to the manuscript when editing, her genuineness during our virtual visits, and her willingness to have a difficult discussion -- all with grace, making it a positive experience.
Tori is exceptional with detail, is prompt with her thought-out responses, and uses her organizational skills to make every experience professional.
I highly recommend Tori for her coaching and editing services. She is worth every penny."
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Book Coaching
"Your precise directions, encouraging words, consistent follow-up, and probing questions helped make the often grueling journey easier to manage.
...it was your personality that made working with you so enjoyable. Every email we exchanged left me feeling energized, inspired, and capable. When we met on Zoom, it was like connecting with an old friend.
I also appreciated how you approached correction. No one likes to hear negative words, especially when they have put so much energy and effort into their project. Your comments remained free of judgment and condescension. Your tone stayed positive and encouraging, urging me to be my best and to stretch myself.
I most appreciated Tori’s ability to listen with purpose, give her full attention to the manuscript when editing, her genuineness during our virtual visits, and her willingness to have a difficult discussion -- all with grace, making it a positive experience.
Tori is exceptional with detail, is prompt with her thought-out responses, and uses her organizational skills to make every experience professional.
I highly recommend Tori for her coaching and editing services. She is worth every penny."
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Book Coaching
EDITORIAL SERVICES
I specialize in high-level editing that affords the writer an editorial letter, significant comments (developmental editing), and suggestions to improve the manuscript.
MANUSCRIPT EVALUATION A high-level review of your manuscript focusing on the following story structure elements: point, belief and logic, narrative drive (cause/effect with consequences), protagonist development (clear and strong goals, motivation, conflict), point of view, emotions, and show vs. tell. The purpose of an evaluation is to identify what is working and what isn't. Includes an extensive editorial letter, a 1-hour coaching call to review the evaluation, and one week of email access to answer follow-up questions. Choose this service if... -you haven't used a developmental editor prior to drafting your story; an evaluation will help focus your revision efforts -you're unsure why your book isn't selling -agents aren't requesting fulls after they read your partials -before you pitch agents so you can fix major issues -when you're stuck in the revision process and you're not sure how to write forward -you're ready for honest feedback about your writing First Draft? Ask about the Synopsis Review Service for a reduced rate. Turnaround Time: Typically 3 weeks Cost: $0.015-$0.025 per word *Standard 250-words per page up to 240pgs (60k words) Longer manuscripts may incur an additional cost |
DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT
A deep-dive review of your manuscript focusing on all the elements of a Manuscript Evaluation plus the following: pacing, time, dialogue, paragraph and scene structure, plot devices, tense, repetition, sentence structure, and point of view choice. A developmental edit is a comprehensive review of all levels of story structure and writing technique. Includes in-line comments, an extensive editorial letter, a 1-hour coaching call to review the edit, and one month of email access to answer follow-up questions. Choose this service if... -you've finished your draft and you want objective feedback from high to deep-level writing -you're not sure why your story isn't working -you've received vague feedback from beta readers about something "not right" with your story -you need specific examples on how to restructure sentences, paragraphs, and scenes -you want to find your story or develop a stronger story during the revision process Turnaround Time: Typically 5+ weeks Cost: $0.022-$0.045 per word *Standard 250-words per page up to 240pgs (60k words) Longer manuscripts may incur an additional cost |
Editorial Testimonial
The professionalism and expertise in your craft are exemplary, and I look forward to working with you again.
I am pleased to recommend your services to writers with open minds and willing hearts ready to grow in their writing abilities.
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Manuscript Evaluation and Developmental Editing
The professionalism and expertise in your craft are exemplary, and I look forward to working with you again.
I am pleased to recommend your services to writers with open minds and willing hearts ready to grow in their writing abilities.
~Heidi McGill, Historical Romance Author, Manuscript Evaluation and Developmental Editing